“Consider the lim’rick emphatic;
Mark feet anapestic-syllabic.
(Aside– parenthetic;
Perhaps exegetic.)
Deliver the punchline dramatic!”
This is the second part of what I imagine will be a five-post project in total, developing a conference talk I gave last summer into a piece of prose. This post will discuss how I have used the limerick form in some science poetry endeavors. Serendipitously, it works well to use a Twitter poem I’ve never “expanded” here before, posted on 12 May 2022 for National Limerick Day, as an introduction.
“Consider the lim’rick emphatic; /
Mark feet anapestic-syllabic…”
This Twitter poem was one in which some of the rules of the “limerick emphatic” were presented via the familiar structure of the limerick itself. The metric feet used in the limerick are anapests (e.g., “in-ter-VENE”) or amphibrachs (e.g., “con-DI-tions”), depending on where the line breaks occur. Moreover, lines 1-2 in a limerick are often those that set out the premise or subject of the verse (as in Edmund Lear’s “There was an old man of Thermopylae” and many others).
“(Aside– parenthetic;
Perhaps exegetic.)
Deliver the punchline dramatic!”
The rest of this poem presents a commentary on the humorous, light nature of the limerick, noting how the AABBA rhyme scheme can allow particularly well for a parenthetical or explanatory side comment in lines 3-4, as well as a punchline or insight in line 5.
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I’ve written previously about how April 2019 was a fortuitous month in that it was the overlap of National Poetry Month and the International Year of the Periodic Table: the juxtaposition was enough motivation to deliberately celebrate my interest in both chemistry and poetry. I joined Twitter that spring and enjoyed the specific challenge of posting 30 poems in 30 days, relating the limericks to some of the science stories and concepts I had taught most often over the past several years.
The limerick form has been in use for centuries; its famous structure was crucial in facilitating this initial interdisciplinary step. It had previously been challenging, in my own experience, to find a way to combine chemistry and language as two fields of interest; indeed, that sentiment could someday be expanded into its own set of essays. However, to keep the comment more germane to this theme: an academic career in STEM involves much writing, but that writing is primarily informative, rather than creative. Moreover, the tension of accessibility and precision is one I still work to balance when presenting scientific vocabulary as a teacher, and I’m confident this will be a challenge throughout my career. Knowing the “rules” for the limerick, as well as the limerick’s humorous nature, provided enough structure, yet flexibility (speaking of tension!), with which to begin this science writing endeavor.
I was pleased to succeed at writing 30 poems in that initial April project. It was striking how reframing my understanding of varied chemistry concepts (such as covalent bonding and the gold foil experiment) in these poems distilled such topics down to their essentials, which would also benefit my teaching in subsequent years.
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