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Concentrated Efforts

“One metaphor most vivid for poetic inspiration: /
The spark of creativity in supersaturation. /  
A sudden-seen assembly: solute’s newly found formation /
Yields crystallizing product from excessive concentration.”

The 10 April 2025 Bluesky poem built on a marvelous quote from renowned author Margaret Atwood in The Paris Review in 1990, as she commented on her creative process: “The genesis of a poem for me is usually a cluster of words.  The only good metaphor I can think of is a scientific one: dipping a thread into a supersaturated solution to induce crystal formation.”  

“One metaphor most vivid for poetic inspiration: /
The spark of creativity in supersaturation..”  

Atwood alludes in her quote to a reliably fun chemistry demonstration.  A solution consists of a solute (what’s present in lesser quantity; typically a solid) in a solvent (what’s present in greater quantity; typically a liquid).  An aqueous solution is something dissolved in water.  

When a solution is supersaturated, more solute has been dissolved in the solvent that would be expected from the solution’s equilibrium behavior.  (This can be achieved by manipulating temperature: solutes are typically more soluble at higher temperatures, so if you prepare a heated solution and then take care as you cool it down, you can generate a supersaturated solution.)  However the solution is prepared, it then only takes a small disturbance to seed a sudden, dramatic crystallization process.  

In that last link’s video, the author uses a small crystal, but as Atwood notes, a thread can accomplish the same thing.     

“A sudden-seen assembly: solute’s newly found formation /
Yields crystallizing product from excessive concentration.”

The use of “formation” here is slightly imprecise, as the solute is always there; it’s just in solution initially.  The “sudden-seen assembly” of the crystallization process is a great metaphor for a moment of inspiration.  When I encountered Atwood’s quote, I was particularly reminded of Graham Wallas’s model of creative cognition, where illumination follows as an abrupt moment, after the longer steps of preparation and incubation.   

I liked “excessive concentration” as a closing phrase here, both in terms of how a chemist would quantitatively describe their supersaturated solution in a lab setting and how a poet would qualitatively describe the writing process necessary to achieve their draft.